lunes, 27 de agosto de 2007

GREECE EXOTIC COUNTRY

OUTLINE:
1. Greece has a particular long and eventful history and a cultural country.
1.1. Geographical Features.
2. Greece's history.
2.1. Ancient Era.
2.2. Modern Era.
3. Its Culture.
3.1. Culture are influenced.
3.2. Religion.
4. why this a exotic site.
4.1. Touristic Places.

GREECE EXOTIC COUNTRY

Greece has a particular long and eventful history and a cultural country. Greece's its located on the southern end of the Balkan peninsula, the capital city is Athens. In adittion, western Greece contains a number of lakes and wetlands and it is dominated by Pindus mountain range. Pindus has a maximun elevation of 2.636 metres and it is essentially a prolongation of the Dinaric Alps.

The shores of Greece's Aegean Sea saw the emergence of the first advanced civilizations in the wake of the Minoan and Mycenean civilizations, there emerged across the Greek peninsula and islands poleis, or city- states, each with their own distinct social and govermental infrastructure, uniting under Athens and Sparta to repel Persian advance. Also, The conditions had been created for the flowering of Athens and birth of classical civilization, drawing to a close only with the culmination of the perennial conflict between Athens and Sparta, the Peloponnesian war. In contrast, the modern Greece is a developed country a member of the European Union since 1981. In adittion, the country adopted the Euro in 2001 and being member of the Economic and Monetary Union of the European Union since 2001, in 2004 organized the Olympic Games in Athens.

Greek culture envolved over several thousand years, with it's earliest known civilization being in the Mycenean and Minoan era, continuing into classical Greece, the birth of the Hellenistic era and through the influence of the Roman Empire and its Greek Eastern successor the Byzantine Empire. On the other hand, the constitution of Greece recognizes the Greek Orthodox faith as the "established" religion of the country. Also, the Muslim community numbers between 200.000 and 300.000 and the Greek members of roman Catholic faith are estimated at 50.000.

To sum up, Greek is a exotic site for known the hystoric developtment of our society and the same time you can know beautiful atiques contructions such as, Acropolis, Athens Olympic Stadium, white Tower, Byzantine Museum, etc.

3 comentarios:

Carolina Castaño dijo...

Your outline is very good and it matches the structure you follow in your writing. However, you need to rewrite some parts that are not written in your own words. It's necessary that you use your language and don't copy parts of the source that you found.

DORIS GALEANO dijo...
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DORIS GALEANO dijo...

HI CAROLINA, I AGREE WITH CAROLINA´S TEACHER. I CHECK YOU ESSAY AND I FOUND SOME MISTAKES YOU HAVE SOME UNNECESSARIES WORDS LIKE . “its” IN: Greece's its located AND YOU FORGOT SOME WORDS LIKE our society and X the same time you can know AT. CAPITAL LETTER Also, The conditions, …the… I BELIEVE THAN THE HISTORY IS IMPORTANT BUT IN THIS ESSAY IS MORE IMPORTANT THAN YOU DEVELOP OTHER TOPICS LIKE CULTURE, CUSTOMS AND YOU CAN DESCRIBE MORE THIS COUNTRY. BUT IN GENERAL, YOUR ESSAY HAS A GOOD ESTRUCTURE AND WE CAN CHECK IT TO USE IN OUR ESSAY.